Six years is not a small number. Till that time I'm not a child anymore. I picture I have a soul mate who can share all the great things with me and always stand by me. If he is the right person who can take care of me as my husband, it is time to make a schedule for our family as early as possible. We will build our dream house in a place which has fresh air, no pollution The most important of all, it should be not far from downtown in Taichung.
Human beings cannot live without true love so I will hold every moment we go through, carefully manage our lovely family.
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Watch grammar. "At that time I will not be a child any more. I imagine that I will have a soul mate. . ." This should use the future tense. Missing a period after "pollution." Missing a comma after "true love,".
Some problem with the last part of the last sentence too.
Chris O'Brien
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