My name is Lainie Cho. I'm a person who
is full of energy and always passionate
in learning new things. Keeping myself
busy enriches my life and I like to work
hard. Sometimes relaxing body and mind
can prepare more power for the future
rather than consistently immersing oneself
in work. I think the occupation of being a
tour guide is suitable for me. I am influent
in 3 languages. English, French, as well as
Japanese. Due to my four years of learning
skills in university, I have great ability of
management thanks to clubs. Strong
creativity is also my useful tool. I truly
believe merely those people who are ready
for the future could stand out in the end.
Undoubtedly, I am your best choice.
1 則留言:
This is a nice introduction but it would not be quite suitable to accompany a resume. I see that for the 3rd grading period, 11/26 to 12/23, there were only those three entries in December; 25% of the needed number. However, I'll also add the 3 January entries, so you can have six all told. I generally like the content of your writing, though you must be a bit more careful about the grammar details. Spell and grammar check each post before you submit it, please, next semester. Note the missing space in "Self-introduction (dream type)." I don't know what that phrase means here, either.
Well, with only 6 entries the most I could possibly give you is a 50%, and it's not perfect writing; I'll give you a 42. The averaged blog grade ends up a 55--nearly passing, anyway. Keep up next semester and you'll be fine.
Best wishes for the lunar new year.
Chris O'Brien
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