2007年11月21日 星期三
Pleasure time
Since I was a student, teachers and even elder relatives have kept telling me that the most happiest time in everyone's life is being a student. Now I eventually realize the true meaning of these words. Study is an easy thing, but most teenagers ignore what they already have currently. They have parents' supporting and don't have to worry about economical problems. All things are prepared for them just to let them grow without a hitch. Only those who are responsible f0r themselves could seize the chance during this splendid age!
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More tense problems here. "Since I became a student, . . ." "Now I have finally come to realize. . ." "Studying is an easy thing. . ."
Generally good writing and expression, but just take care with grammar and such. I note that you put a zero into "for" and this yields a nonsense word.
Keep going and write enough times next period. . .
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Chris O'Brien
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